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The¡¡tables¡¡show¡¡averaged¡¡percentage¡¡scores¡¡achieved¡¡in¡¡the¡¡school¡¡subjects¡¡of¡¡Maths,¡¡Science,¡¡Geography,¡¡Languages¡¡and¡¡Sport¡¡by¡¡children¡¡aged¡¡7,¡¡10,¡¡13,¡¡and¡¡15¡¡according¡¡to¡¡sex.¡¡¡¡The¡¡subjects¡¡for¡¡which¡¡the¡¡highest¡¡average¡¡scores¡¡were¡¡recorded¡¡were¡¡Sport,¡¡at¡¡78%¡¡(boys),¡¡and¡¡Languages,¡¡at¡¡75%¡¡(girls).¡¡The¡¡strongest¡¡subject¡¡for¡¡each¡¡sex¡¡was¡¡revealed¡¡to¡¡be¡¡the¡¡weakest¡¡for¡¡the¡¡opposite¡¡sex,¡¡with¡¡these¡¡two¡¡subjects¡¡also¡¡comprising¡¡the¡¡lowest¡¡recorded¡¡scores,¡¡at¡¡60%¡¡and¡¡70%¡¡respectively.¡¡¡¡Apart¡¡from¡¡these¡¡two¡¡subjects¡¡the¡¡performance¡¡of¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡was¡¡comparatively¡¡similar.¡¡Boys¡¡tended¡¡to¡¡score¡¡higher¡¡in¡¡Geography,¡¡with¡¡scores¡¡ranging¡¡from¡¡63%¡¡to¡¡70%,¡¡while¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡girls¡¡ranged¡¡between¡¡62%¡¡and¡¡64%.¡¡However,¡¡it¡¡is¡¡significant¡¡that¡¡at¡¡the¡¡age¡¡of¡¡15¡¡both¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡alike¡¡averaged¡¡a¡¡score¡¡of¡¡64%¡¡for¡¡this¡¡subject.¡¡The¡¡differences¡¡between¡¡the¡¡sexes¡¡for¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡Maths¡¡and¡¡Science¡¡were¡¡negligible.¡¡¡¡It¡¡is¡¡more¡¡interesting¡¡to¡¡observe¡¡the¡¡patterns¡¡that¡¡emerge¡¡when¡¡the¡¡data¡¡is¡¡examined¡¡in¡¡terms¡¡of¡¡age¡¡groups.¡¡In¡¡general,¡¡for¡¡both¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls,¡¡children¡¡tended¡¡to¡¡improve¡¡as¡¡they¡¡got¡¡older.¡¡For¡¡boys,¡¡between¡¡the¡¡ages¡¡of¡¡7¡¡and¡¡15,¡¡improvement¡¡can¡¡be¡¡observed¡¡in¡¡these¡¡ranges¡¡of¡¡scores:¡¡Maths¡¡(63-67%),¡¡Science¡¡(70-73%),¡¡Geography¡¡(63-64%),¡¡and¡¡Sport¡¡(71-78%).¡¡For¡¡girls,¡¡it¡¡can¡¡be¡¡observed¡¡in¡¡these¡¡score¡¡ranges:¡¡Maths¡¡(64-68%),¡¡Science¡¡(69-72%),¡¡Geography¡¡(62-64%),¡¡and¡¡Languages¡¡(62-75%).¡¡The¡¡increase¡¡in¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡girls¡¡for¡¡this¡¡last¡¡subject,¡¡Languages,¡¡was¡¡the¡¡greatest¡¡overall¡¡improvement¡¡across¡¡the¡¡different¡¡age¡¡groups,¡¡and¡¡its¡¡rise¡¡from¡¡65%¡¡to¡¡75%¡¡also¡¡constituted¡¡the¡¡greatest¡¡margin¡¡between¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡any¡¡two¡¡particular¡¡age¡¡groups.¡¡¡¡The¡¡exceptions¡¡to¡¡the¡¡general¡¡trend¡¡were¡¡Languages,¡¡in¡¡which¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡boys¡¡steadily¡¡declined¡¡from¡¡62%¡¡at¡¡7¡¡years¡¡to¡¡58%¡¡at¡¡15¡¡years,¡¡and¡¡Sport,¡¡in¡¡which¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡girls¡¡steadily¡¡declined¡¡from¡¡65%¡¡to¡¡60%.¡¡The¡¡other¡¡significant¡¡exceptions¡¡that¡¡emerged¡¡were¡¡that¡¡both¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡recorded¡¡a¡¡slump¡¡between¡¡particular¡¡ages.¡¡For¡¡girls¡¡this¡¡happened¡¡between¡¡the¡¡ages¡¡of¡¡10¡¡and¡¡13,¡¡when¡¡scores¡¡in¡¡Maths¡¡fell¡¡by¡¡1%,¡¡Science¡¡2%,¡¡and¡¡Geography,¡¡Languages¡¡and¡¡Sport¡¡by¡¡2%.¡¡For¡¡boys¡¡the¡¡ages¡¡at¡¡which¡¡this¡¡occurred¡¡were¡¡13¡¡to¡¡15,¡¡when¡¡Maths¡¡and¡¡Languages¡¡both¡¡fell¡¡by¡¡2%,¡¡Science¡¡1%¡¡and¡¡Geography¡¡by¡¡6%.¡¡Boys'¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡sport¡¡actually¡¡increased¡¡by¡¡3%¡¡during¡¡this¡¡period.¡¡¡¡To¡¡sum¡¡up,¡¡these¡¡tables¡¡show¡¡that¡¡in¡¡this¡¡study,¡¡on¡¡average,¡¡males¡¡in¡¡this¡¡age¡¡range¡¡performed¡¡better¡¡in¡¡Sport¡¡and¡¡females¡¡performed¡¡better¡¡in¡¡Languages.¡¡The¡¡other¡¡significant¡¡pattern¡¡that¡¡emerged¡¡from¡¡the¡¡data¡¡was¡¡that¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡both¡¡went¡¡through¡¡a¡¡slump¡¡in¡¡performance,¡¡but¡¡that¡¡this¡¡slump¡¡happened¡¡at¡¡different¡¡ages¡¡for¡¡the¡¡different¡¡sexes.¡¡¡¡¡¡

Task¡¡1:¡¡You¡¡should¡¡spend¡¡about¡¡20¡¡minutes¡¡on¡¡this¡¡task.¡¡¡¡The¡¡tables¡¡below¡¡are¡¡the¡¡results¡¡of¡¡research,¡¡which¡¡examined¡¡the¡¡average¡¡percentage¡¡marks¡¡scored¡¡by¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡of¡¡different¡¡ages¡¡in¡¡several¡¡school¡¡subjects.¡¡Write¡¡report¡¡for¡¡a¡¡university¡¡lecturer¡¡describing¡¡the¡¡information¡¡below.¡¡You¡¡should¡¡write¡¡a¡¡minimum¡¡of¡¡150¡¡words.¡¡

Boys:¡¡

Subject

¡¡Age¡¡ Maths Science Geography Languages Sports

7 63% 70% 63% 62% 71%

10 65% 72% 68% 60% 74%

13 69% 74% 70% 60% 75%

15 67% 73% 64% 58% 78%

Girls:¡¡

Subject

¡¡Age¡¡ Maths Science Geography Languages Sports

7 64% 69% 62% 62% 65%

10 65% 73% 64% 67% 64%

13 64% 70% 62% 65% 62%

15 68% 72% 64% 75% 60%

×÷Õß½¨Òé:¡¡This¡¡IELTS¡¡task¡¡1¡¡example¡¡is¡¡quite¡¡difficult¡¡because¡¡it¡¡presents¡¡the¡¡student¡¡with¡¡a¡¡lot¡¡of¡¡data,¡¡and¡¡because¡¡the¡¡significant¡¡trends¡¡in¡¡the¡¡data¡¡are¡¡not¡¡overly¡¡obvious.¡¡Let's¡¡have¡¡a¡¡look¡¡at¡¡how¡¡we¡¡might¡¡go¡¡about¡¡organising¡¡the¡¡information¡¡in¡¡the¡¡tables¡¡into¡¡a¡¡task¡¡1¡¡answer.

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1.¡¡First,¡¡we¡¡need¡¡to¡¡be¡¡aware¡¡of¡¡all¡¡of¡¡the¡¡variables¡¡that¡¡make¡¡up¡¡the¡¡data:¡¡the¡¡scores¡¡(percentage¡¡averages),¡¡the¡¡school¡¡subjects,¡¡the¡¡age¡¡groups¡¡and¡¡the¡¡gender¡¡or¡¡sex.

2.¡¡Now¡¡we¡¡need¡¡to¡¡sort¡¡the¡¡information¡¡into¡¡some¡¡sort¡¡of¡¡sense:¡¡

a.)¡¡The¡¡first¡¡thing¡¡to¡¡do¡¡with¡¡any¡¡table¡¡is¡¡to¡¡find¡¡the¡¡highest¡¡and¡¡lowest¡¡numbers.¡¡Looking¡¡at¡¡these¡¡tables¡¡we¡¡can¡¡see¡¡that¡¡boys¡¡tended¡¡to¡¡score¡¡highly¡¡in¡¡sport¡¡and¡¡lowly¡¡in¡¡languages,¡¡and¡¡that¡¡girls¡¡on¡¡the¡¡other¡¡hand¡¡tended¡¡to¡¡score¡¡highly¡¡in¡¡languages¡¡and¡¡lowly¡¡in¡¡sport.¡¡This¡¡is¡¡the¡¡first¡¡and¡¡most¡¡obvious¡¡significant¡¡feature¡¡of¡¡the¡¡tables¡¡-¡¡the¡¡boys'¡¡strong¡¡subject¡¡is¡¡the¡¡girls'¡¡weak¡¡subject¡¡and¡¡vice¡¡versa.¡¡

b.)¡¡But¡¡a¡¡comparison¡¡of¡¡subject¡¡scores¡¡between¡¡the¡¡two¡¡sexes¡¡reveals¡¡only¡¡limited¡¡significance.¡¡We¡¡can¡¡see¡¡that¡¡for¡¡most¡¡of¡¡the¡¡subjects¡¡the¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡got¡¡similar¡¡scores.¡¡Boys¡¡scored¡¡slightly¡¡higher¡¡in¡¡geography,¡¡but¡¡by¡¡the¡¡age¡¡of¡¡15¡¡the¡¡scores¡¡were¡¡the¡¡same.¡¡So,¡¡all¡¡that¡¡we¡¡can¡¡say¡¡about¡¡the¡¡charts¡¡in¡¡terms¡¡of¡¡the¡¡differences¡¡between¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡by¡¡subject¡¡is¡¡that,¡¡besides¡¡sport¡¡and¡¡languages,¡¡they¡¡were¡¡negligible¡¡(not¡¡important).

c.)¡¡The¡¡next¡¡logical¡¡step¡¡then,¡¡is¡¡to¡¡look¡¡closely¡¡at¡¡the¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡the¡¡different¡¡age¡¡groups.¡¡When¡¡we¡¡do¡¡this¡¡we¡¡find¡¡that¡¡some¡¡interesting¡¡patterns¡¡emerge.¡¡For¡¡all¡¡of¡¡the¡¡subjects,¡¡except¡¡the¡¡weak¡¡subject¡¡for¡¡each¡¡sex¡¡(languages¡¡and¡¡sports),¡¡the¡¡scores,¡¡between¡¡the¡¡ages¡¡of¡¡7¡¡and¡¡15,¡¡increased¡¡overall,¡¡for¡¡both¡¡sexes.¡¡But¡¡if¡¡we¡¡look¡¡at¡¡the¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡the¡¡years¡¡between¡¡these¡¡two¡¡we¡¡see¡¡that¡¡the¡¡improvement¡¡was¡¡not¡¡constant,¡¡and¡¡that¡¡at¡¡a¡¡particular¡¡age¡¡the¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡most¡¡subjects¡¡fell.¡¡Also,¡¡the¡¡age¡¡at¡¡which¡¡this¡¡occurred¡¡was¡¡not¡¡the¡¡same¡¡for¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls.¡¡This¡¡pattern¡¡seems¡¡to¡¡reveal¡¡that¡¡both¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡went¡¡through¡¡a¡¡slump¡¡in¡¡academic¡¡performance,¡¡but¡¡at¡¡different¡¡times,¡¡which¡¡is¡¡certainly¡¡an¡¡interesting¡¡feature¡¡of¡¡the¡¡data¡¡in¡¡the¡¡tables,¡¡and¡¡definitely¡¡needs¡¡to¡¡be¡¡mentioned.¡¡The¡¡largest¡¡difference¡¡between¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡two¡¡different¡¡age¡¡groups¡¡(Languages¡¡-¡¡10%;¡¡65-75%¡¡13-15yrs)¡¡should¡¡also¡¡be¡¡noticed.

3.¡¡The¡¡next¡¡thing¡¡to¡¡do¡¡is¡¡to¡¡take¡¡our¡¡analysis¡¡of¡¡the¡¡data¡¡and¡¡make¡¡a¡¡plan¡¡for¡¡our¡¡report.¡¡A¡¡plan¡¡for¡¡these¡¡tables¡¡might¡¡look¡¡like¡¡this:

a.)¡¡Introductory¡¡sentence-¡¡table¡¡shows:¡¡percentage¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡school¡¡subjects¡¡(list),¡¡different¡¡ages¡¡(list),¡¡different¡¡sexes.

b.)¡¡Highest¡¡and¡¡lowest¡¡subjects¡¡for¡¡boys/girls-¡¡sport/languages-¡¡opposites

c.)¡¡Other¡¡subjects¡¡very¡¡similar-¡¡subjects¡¡by¡¡sex¡¡not¡¡too¡¡significant

d.)¡¡More¡¡significant-¡¡age¡¡groups-¡¡all¡¡subjects¡¡increased¡¡(overall)-¡¡except¡¡for¡¡slumps¡¡(list¡¡subject¡¡figures)-¡¡different¡¡ages¡¡for¡¡boys/girls-¡¡13-15/¡¡11-13e.)¡¡Concluding¡¡sentence-¡¡boys¡¡performed¡¡better¡¡in¡¡sport,¡¡girls¡¡languages-¡¡both¡¡sexes¡¡experienced¡¡performance¡¡slump¡¡but¡¡at¡¡different¡¡ages.

4.¡¡After¡¡a¡¡plan¡¡has¡¡been¡¡made,¡¡we¡¡can¡¡write¡¡the¡¡report¡¡incorporating¡¡the¡¡facts¡¡and¡¡figures¡¡from¡¡the¡¡charts.¡¡Look¡¡at¡¡how¡¡this¡¡has¡¡been¡¡done¡¡below.¡¡Keep¡¡in¡¡mind¡¡that¡¡the¡¡answer¡¡below¡¡is¡¡quite¡¡extensive,¡¡and¡¡that¡¡often¡¡because¡¡of¡¡time¡¡answers¡¡will¡¡not¡¡be¡¡as¡¡detailed¡¡as¡¡this.¡¡In¡¡those¡¡cases¡¡the¡¡least¡¡significant¡¡information¡¡should¡¡be¡¡discarded.¡¡In¡¡this¡¡case¡¡the¡¡least¡¡significant¡¡information¡¡is¡¡that¡¡about¡¡boys¡¡being¡¡slightly¡¡higher¡¡in¡¡Geography,¡¡and¡¡the¡¡part¡¡about¡¡the¡¡greatest¡¡difference¡¡between¡¡two¡¡particular¡¡age¡¡groups.¡¡¡¡Notice¡¡the¡¡way¡¡data¡¡has¡¡been¡¡incorporated¡¡below.¡¡The¡¡prepositions¡¡and¡¡other¡¡useful¡¡terms¡¡are¡¡in¡¡italics.¡¡

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The¡¡tables¡¡show¡¡averaged¡¡percentage¡¡scores¡¡achieved¡¡in¡¡the¡¡school¡¡subjects¡¡of¡¡Maths,¡¡Science,¡¡Geography,¡¡Languages¡¡and¡¡Sport¡¡by¡¡children¡¡aged¡¡7,¡¡10,¡¡13,¡¡and¡¡15¡¡according¡¡to¡¡sex.¡¡¡¡The¡¡subjects¡¡for¡¡which¡¡the¡¡highest¡¡average¡¡scores¡¡were¡¡recorded¡¡were¡¡Sport,¡¡at¡¡78%¡¡(boys),¡¡and¡¡Languages,¡¡at¡¡75%¡¡(girls).¡¡The¡¡strongest¡¡subject¡¡for¡¡each¡¡sex¡¡was¡¡revealed¡¡to¡¡be¡¡the¡¡weakest¡¡for¡¡the¡¡opposite¡¡sex,¡¡with¡¡these¡¡two¡¡subjects¡¡also¡¡comprising¡¡the¡¡lowest¡¡recorded¡¡scores,¡¡at¡¡60%¡¡and¡¡70%¡¡respectively.¡¡¡¡Apart¡¡from¡¡these¡¡two¡¡subjects¡¡the¡¡performance¡¡of¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡was¡¡comparatively¡¡similar.¡¡Boys¡¡tended¡¡to¡¡score¡¡higher¡¡in¡¡Geography,¡¡with¡¡scores¡¡ranging¡¡from¡¡63%¡¡to¡¡70%,¡¡while¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡girls¡¡ranged¡¡between¡¡62%¡¡and¡¡64%.¡¡However,¡¡it¡¡is¡¡significant¡¡that¡¡at¡¡the¡¡age¡¡of¡¡15¡¡both¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡alike¡¡averaged¡¡a¡¡score¡¡of¡¡64%¡¡for¡¡this¡¡subject.¡¡The¡¡differences¡¡between¡¡the¡¡sexes¡¡for¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡Maths¡¡and¡¡Science¡¡were¡¡negligible.¡¡¡¡It¡¡is¡¡more¡¡interesting¡¡to¡¡observe¡¡the¡¡patterns¡¡that¡¡emerge¡¡when¡¡the¡¡data¡¡is¡¡examined¡¡in¡¡terms¡¡of¡¡age¡¡groups.¡¡In¡¡general,¡¡for¡¡both¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls,¡¡children¡¡tended¡¡to¡¡improve¡¡as¡¡they¡¡got¡¡older.¡¡For¡¡boys,¡¡between¡¡the¡¡ages¡¡of¡¡7¡¡and¡¡15,¡¡improvement¡¡can¡¡be¡¡observed¡¡in¡¡these¡¡ranges¡¡of¡¡scores:¡¡Maths¡¡(63-67%),¡¡Science¡¡(70-73%),¡¡Geography¡¡(63-64%),¡¡and¡¡Sport¡¡(71-78%).¡¡For¡¡girls,¡¡it¡¡can¡¡be¡¡observed¡¡in¡¡these¡¡score¡¡ranges:¡¡Maths¡¡(64-68%),¡¡Science¡¡(69-72%),¡¡Geography¡¡(62-64%),¡¡and¡¡Languages¡¡(62-75%).¡¡The¡¡increase¡¡in¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡girls¡¡for¡¡this¡¡last¡¡subject,¡¡Languages,¡¡was¡¡the¡¡greatest¡¡overall¡¡improvement¡¡across¡¡the¡¡different¡¡age¡¡groups,¡¡and¡¡its¡¡rise¡¡from¡¡65%¡¡to¡¡75%¡¡also¡¡constituted¡¡the¡¡greatest¡¡margin¡¡between¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡any¡¡two¡¡particular¡¡age¡¡groups.¡¡¡¡The¡¡exceptions¡¡to¡¡the¡¡general¡¡trend¡¡were¡¡Languages,¡¡in¡¡which¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡boys¡¡steadily¡¡declined¡¡from¡¡62%¡¡at¡¡7¡¡years¡¡to¡¡58%¡¡at¡¡15¡¡years,¡¡and¡¡Sport,¡¡in¡¡which¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡girls¡¡steadily¡¡declined¡¡from¡¡65%¡¡to¡¡60%.¡¡The¡¡other¡¡significant¡¡exceptions¡¡that¡¡emerged¡¡were¡¡that¡¡both¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡recorded¡¡a¡¡slump¡¡between¡¡particular¡¡ages.¡¡For¡¡girls¡¡this¡¡happened¡¡between¡¡the¡¡ages¡¡of¡¡10¡¡and¡¡13,¡¡when¡¡scores¡¡in¡¡Maths¡¡fell¡¡by¡¡1%,¡¡Science¡¡2%,¡¡and¡¡Geography,¡¡Languages¡¡and¡¡Sport¡¡by¡¡2%.¡¡For¡¡boys¡¡the¡¡ages¡¡at¡¡which¡¡this¡¡occurred¡¡were¡¡13¡¡to¡¡15,¡¡when¡¡Maths¡¡and¡¡Languages¡¡both¡¡fell¡¡by¡¡2%,¡¡Science¡¡1%¡¡and¡¡Geography¡¡by¡¡6%.¡¡Boys'¡¡scores¡¡for¡¡sport¡¡actually¡¡increased¡¡by¡¡3%¡¡during¡¡this¡¡period.¡¡¡¡To¡¡sum¡¡up,¡¡these¡¡tables¡¡show¡¡that¡¡in¡¡this¡¡study,¡¡on¡¡average,¡¡males¡¡in¡¡this¡¡age¡¡range¡¡performed¡¡better¡¡in¡¡Sport¡¡and¡¡females¡¡performed¡¡better¡¡in¡¡Languages.¡¡The¡¡other¡¡significant¡¡pattern¡¡that¡¡emerged¡¡from¡¡the¡¡data¡¡was¡¡that¡¡boys¡¡and¡¡girls¡¡both¡¡went¡¡through¡¡a¡¡slump¡¡in¡¡performance,¡¡but¡¡that¡¡this¡¡slump¡¡happened¡¡at¡¡different¡¡ages¡¡for¡¡the¡¡different¡¡sexes.¡¡

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